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Default تین جنموں کی کہانی۔۔۔

تین جنموں کی کہانی


پہلا جنم


دکان پر ایک نوجوان آتا ہے۔ مختلف چیزیں دیکھنے کے بعد اور دکاندار سے بات کر کے وہ میری مانگ کرتا ہے۔
میں ہوں ایل جی -جی ٹو ایٹ زیرو ٹو موبائل۔۔۔۔۔
میری چیکنگ کر کے دکاندار سے مناسب قیمت پر مجھے خرید لیا گیا۔ اِس کےساتھ ہی مجھ پر انگوٹھوں کی برسات شروع ہوگئی
کبھی مجھےکان سے لگایا جاتا تو کبھی نیلا دانت چلا دیا جاتا۔ وائی فائی کا چیک کرنا تو لازمی تھا ہی۔۔
ابھی زیادہ دیر نہیں ہوئی تھی کے میں تھک گیا۔
اور انگوٹھوں کا جواب دینا چھوڑ دیا بلکہ کبھی کبھی تنگ آ کر میں خود سے ہی بٹن دبا دیتا۔۔۔۔۔
ایسے میں مجھے واپس دکان پر لایا گیا۔ اور میرے لیے دئیے گئے پیسے واپس لے لیے گئے۔

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اب میرا جسم اور میری روح دونوں بدل گئے۔
میں ہوں ایل جی- جی ٹو ایٹ زیرو ٹو موبائل۔
میرے خریدنے سے پہلے میری زیادہ بہتر جانچ پرتال کی گئی۔ اُس کے بعد دکاندار سے گرانئٹی لے کر میرا سودا ہوا۔
اور یوں میری زندگی کی نئی شروعات ہوئی۔ شروع سے ہی شائد میرا استعمال کچھ زیادہ ہی کیا جاتا رہا۔
میری بیٹری کو اچھے سے نچوڑ لیا جاتا اور پھر آہستہ آہستہ میرا خیال رکھنے میں بھی کمی ہونے لگی۔
شروع میں تو کارپٹ پر ہی گِرایا جاتا تھا پھر ٹائلز پر بھی گِرایا جانے لگا۔ پہلے بڑا حادثہ تب پیش آیا کے جب ایک دِن مجھے سڑک پر گرا دیا گیا
اور میں دور تک گھسیٹتا گیا۔۔۔ اففف بہت چوٹ آئی مجھے۔۔۔ میری کھال چھل چکی تھی، رنگ رگڑ سے خراب ہوگیا تھا۔۔
اُس کے بعد سے حادثات کا سلسلہ بڑھتا گیا اور ایک دن مجھے اپڈیٹ کرتے ہوئے میرے مالک نے مجھے مار دیا۔۔۔
اب میں چلنے سے قاصر تھا۔۔ کافی تگ و دو کے بعد بھی میری زندگی بہال نہ ہو سکی۔۔۔


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اب کی بار میری روح بدلی گئی۔ میرا سوفٹوئیر پھر سے انسٹال کیا گیا۔
میں ہوں ایل جی- جی ٹو ایٹ زیرو ون موبائل۔
اکثر چیزیں اپگریڈ ہوتی ہیں۔ جبکہ میں ڈاون گریڈ ہوا۔
اب کی بار مجھ میں نئی روح آچکی تھی۔۔ میری یاداشت بھی جا چکی تھی۔۔
آہستہ آہستہ میری سب یاداشت واپس لائی گئی۔۔۔ یہ چار چھ دن میں میں میرے مالک نے میرے بِنا کیسے گزارے یہ
وہی جان سکتا ہے۔۔۔ اِس کے بعد بس یوں ہوا کے پھر سے میرا خیال رکھا جانے لگا۔۔ پھر ایک دِن یوں ہوا کے میں چارجنگ پر لگا تھا
کے کسی کی غلطی سے میں نیچے گرا اور میری سکرین ٹوٹ گئی۔۔ میں اب کافی بُری حالت میں تھا۔ وہ تو اگر مجھ پر پروٹیکٹیو سکرین

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نہیں ہوتی تو میں بالکل ہی فارغ ہوجاتا۔۔۔
میرا مالک میری حالت دیکھ کرپریشان تھا بہت۔۔۔
خیر سے عقلمندی کا مظاہرہ کرتے ہوئے میرے مالک نے مجھے چلا ہی لیا۔۔۔۔
اور وہ مجھے اب تک استعمال کر رہا ہے۔ ۔۔پر اب مجھ میں سے سم تک نکال دی گئی ہے۔ کیوں کے میں سگنل ہی نہیں پکڑتا۔
اب بس مجھے ویٹس ایپ، میسنجر، فیس بک، چند گیمز اور سونگز کے لیے استعمال کیا جاتا ہے۔۔۔
اکثر و بیشتر میں نیچے پکے فرش پر گڑتا رہتا ہوں اور مجھ پر مختلف جگہوں پر چوٹیں ہیں۔

یہاں صرف میری سکرین دیکھائی جارہی ہے۔ جس سے
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Excuse me! Apke mbl ki tarah dhokay baz mbl nhi..
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Or abhi pics nhi a sktin mbl ke halat e zaar ki wrna pta lgta:')
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